Character Submissions for The Avenger, Please Read

[Bm631]

Hello Banzuke members! If you've been up to date on the boards, you will see that I have made my story "The Avenger" public. I don't have too many ideas for characters so I need you guys to think of something! Jk, you don't need to, but if you like to expand your creative wings and make a character of your own, then be my guest. Please note that I will place them where the story will need them and that they will not all be pushed in the begining. Also note: just because the majority of the fighting was with edged weaponry doesn't mean your submission has to follow that.

Okay here are some guide lines for characters:

1) The story is set in Europe, most likely Germany, early to mid 1800s where the world is slowly starting to gain new changes in technology and such. Where swords and bows are begin replaced by rifles and cannons. So try to place the appropriate items with your character. Also your character may come from the other countries and continents, doesn't have to be Europe only.

2) Try to stay within the 16-25 age range. It will be a more mature story that way. 

3) You may be an other type of being other than human. In the story, there will be intelligent monsters/demons. Just no Aliens, the world isn't ready for that.

4) Choose between Good and Evil. We need plenty of both.

5) If you can, I would like to see atleast one female submission. I need more leading ladies. Lol Trying to be an  equal opportunities writer.

Here is the format that I would like you to follow and there will be examples below. One is of Allen the main character and the other is a character my friend and critic Wesley made. He was spot on. His is just one of the many paths you may take.

Name: 

Age: (16-25)

Eye Color: 

Hair:

Physical Apearence: 

Occupation: (Optional)

Family: 

Affilliation:( Optional, but may be useful.) 

Non-battle Items: 

Weapons:  

Abilities: 

Personality:

Examples: (Note, these are not updated with Physical Appearance.)

Name: Allen Von Ferdiand
Age: 17

Eye Color: Green

Hair Color: Oynx black.

Occupation: Demon Slayer, (one more to be added.)

Family: Erica Von Ferdiand (Mother) (Deceased), Alexander Heilhoff (Father) (Deceased).  

Affiliation: None (Yet)

Non-Battle Items: Storing Pouch (Later upgraded to Sactchel)

Weaponry: Divine Cross,One handed Long Sword (Broken guard).
Divine Cross Blade- Cross Becomes the guard, Sword turns to Silver. Lengthy Blue Gem makes up the center of the blade. Gathers and releases Divine Energy from the gem (Acts as a medium). 

Abillities: Gifts of Augmentation (Art of Aug.):
-Eyes of Truth- See through illusions, Able to see through Demons in human disguises. Any being with malicious intentions will be detected during the abillty's activation. 
-(More to come)

Personality: Somewhat Cold depending on the stiuation, Allen seems like the typical loner at first glance. But he knows his manners and knows when to show his respect and gratitude. While a little quiet when he firsts meets someone, he easily opens up when trust is gained. Allen is actually a great person who has some trust issues.

Name: Logan Lore

Age:25

Eye Color: Dark, red-Brown. Turns Bright Red when pushed to Physical limit.

Hair: Dark Brown

Occupation: Guild Mercenary/ Guardian

Family: Father- John Lore, "The Phoenix 
Mother-Catherine Lore, "The Serpent"
Wife- Celia Lore (Deceased- Possessed), "The Seraph"
Son- Jacob Lore, "The shadowling"

Affilliation: The guild

Non-battle Items: Leather Pack, Water Skin, Map, Compass, rope, Small container of healing ointment, paper seals, list of Enemies, Quill Pen.

Weapon: 2'7" Sword- Double Edged, Red Steel, Black Guard, leather- Wraped Handle, Extermely Heat Resistant.

Abilities- Fire Manipulation ( Can Generate, Control, Intensify, immune to his own flames and resistant to other sources of fire.) , Enhanced Strength and Stamina, Skin can become tough and Scalely but only for short periods of time (1-2 min).

Personality: Logan is normally a cheerful and fun loving. Very Personable and Friendly. When the situation turns into something dangerous, He become serious and acts dependable.       

        

[Rai]

Name: Rave

Age: 25

Eye Color: Dark green with scarlet flecks.

Hair:Shaggy black with with grey/silver

Physical Appearance: Tall at an even 6 feet. Has the general appearance of a trustworthy Knight. Practically always wearing a suit of medium weight chain-mail and his special gauntlets. He has a deep scar that runs down from his left eyebrow to middle of his left cheek.

Occupation: Bounty Hunter (Secretly also a monster slayer)

Family: Likely the heir of some small dukedom or fiefdom, but other than that he is not sure. (Unknown to almost everyone he is half serpentdragon)

Affiliation: Unknown

Non-battle Items: A plain silver necklace with a rat charm(facing left), and a pouch for gold. That's about it.

Weapons: He usually fights hand to hand, or hand to blade(using the right gauntlet to counter attacks). If pushed though he may call on one of three weapons. A double bladed, two handed battle axe(that can split into two double bladed single handed axes at any time) A Zweihander(similar to Siefried's Requiem from Soulcalibur), and a Scythe.

Abilities: His personal abilities include, infrared/thermo vision, relatively strong regeneration. Being half serpentdragon he has incredible predatory senses(sight, smell, hearing)

His gauntlets hold their own abilities. The left Gauntlet gives Rave the ability to summon 3 weapons. The Right Gauntlet is defensive. It can change it's shape into 3 shield types a strong reinforced bracer, a simple buckler, and a full fledged Hoplite shield. Also combined with Raves excellent hearing, smell, and sight, the gauntlets increase his situational awareness(Not nearly spider-man sense, but you would have to be invisible and float to sneak up on him lol)

Personality: Rave is a very strong willed person. He is respectful of authority, but won't be pushed around by anyone. When he speaks he is very direct preferring to get to the point of things. Often reacts on instinct rather than common sense. Absolutely detests one sided fights, he will likely step into a situation just to even the odds. Though he has a reputation as a good person he is evil, and won't hesitate in any way to kill, steal, or conquer if need be. Though he does have limits. He will not allow someone to harm innocent/no-combatants for any reason.

*As a note the left gauntlet is a somewhat deranged spirit that was known as the Reaper for along time. Rave defeated it's previous host and forced the spirit to do his will. If someone else were to steal/find/claim/wear the gauntlet it would likely drive them mad and posses their body quickly.*The right Gauntlet is more benign. It would just function as a regular gauntlet until Rave reclaimed it. Both are sentient and can communicate to Rave or anyone who wears them.

[Rai]

Name: Titanya

Age: 21

Eye Color: Violet

Hair: Pure Black, long, is magically bound when in battle

Physical Appearance: Somewhat tall, but noticeably shorter than Rave she stands a 5'8". She is beautiful for being a half-fury. Usually wears a black and red dyed leather armor outfit. Her heritage shows do to the large demonic wings on her back, and natural claws she grows in battle.

Occupation: Bounty Hunter/Monster Slayer

Family: Mother was a Fury, father was a common soldier.

Affiliation: Other than she is partnered and bound to Rave Unknown.

Non-battle Items: Magical Hair brooch that binds her hair. She also has a simple charm bracelet on her left wrist.

Weapons: Natural claws that emerge during battle/while hunting, a pair of short swords, and a whip.

Abilities: Infrared/Thermo sight, Sight of Sins(She can see representations of the seven sins that people have committed) Has a berserk mode where her strength and speed is temporarily increased. She can fly using her wings as well (I guess)

Personality: Obsessed with Rave, and very jealous. She is a cruel young lady. She can't help but tease those she likes, and berate those she doesn't care for over any of the sin's they have committed. Her solutions to problems are usually violent, direct, or inconsiderate of the situation. She becomes very unstable in battle if Rave isn't there to guide and control her actions. (meaning break down, flee, or uncontrollably rampage until Rave stops her or she tires.)

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Name: Kid Tijid

Age: 23

Eye Color: Greyish Blue

Hair: Dark Red

Physical Apearence: Standing at a whopping 5' 9'' with a perfect figure face with no scars. His hair which is a slight darkish red color goes down to the middle of his back. Muscular build that is normally seen in loose fit clothing so that he can have many hidden things under neath leaving plenty of room for whatever can fit under there and still give him mobility.

Occupation: Freelancer

Family: Tijid family line that worked for the Tokugawa.

Affilliation: Chaotic Good

Non-battle Items: Many hidden areas underneath clothes

Weapons: A Martini-Enfield Rifle, 2 Mauser C96s, Spiked Gloves A Tachi and 4 Tantos made by Gorō Nyūdō Masamune.

Abilities: Expert weapon user. A Keen eye, Enhanced Strength,

Personality: A silent person at first when he does not know who he is around with. Once he warms up to a person he likes to try and make them laugh. Always trying to get with beautiful ladies as well when he has the opportunity. Does not receive hints so well and is easily confused. Even around people he knows, if there is one person in the group he does not know, he may act serious and change his attitude completely.

(its been 7 years since i last did something like this)

[Rai]

Name: Rai

Age: 25

Eye Color: Light green with Darker gold flecks.

Hair:Shaggy blonde with black/grey streaks

Physical Appearance: Tall at an even 6 feet. Looks like a typical knight. Wears suit of medium weight chain-mail, the right arm and shoulder covered by heavier plate-mail.

Occupation: Bounty Hunter (Secretly also a monster slayer)

Family: Likely the heir of some small dukedom or fiefdom, but other than that he is not sure. (Unknown to almost everyone he is half serpentdragon)

Affiliation: Unknown

Non-battle Items: A plain gold necklace with a rat charm(facing right), and a pouch for gold.

Weapons: War Hammer, Zweihander, and the armor of his right arm.

Abilities: His personal abilities include, infrared/thermo vision, decent regenerative abilities. Being half serpentdragon give him above average senses(sight, smell, hearing).

Personality: On the surface he has the average Viking/Knight/Hero's bold, friendly, smite Evil, defend justice attitude. Though he inherited more of the dragon sensibilities than Rave's more impulsive nature. He is more likely to notice or catch things other overlook. (In other words his plans can be relied upon to consist of more than "let's go smash it!") He can easily fill a lead or supportive roll and switch between them as needed. As a sort of quirk, just before and during fights he quotes random philosophers.(everything from ancient warrior codes to Socrates, lol)

[Rai]

Name: Phoenix

Age: 24

Eye Color: Gold

Hair: A deep rich Scarlet, long

Physical Appearance: She is slightly taller than Titanya. (about an inch) Uh, you know what just take Lennth (Valkyrie Profile) give her Red hair, gold eyes, and the more traditional silver armor color, lol.

Occupation: Priestess

Affiliation:Long time partner of Rai, otherwise whatever

Non-battle Items: large supplies of medicines, a collection of pagan holy symbols and divine seals.

Weapons: A sacred staff, a short sword, and any number of other symbolic objects. All are divine in origin and blessed.

Abilities: Being human, she doesn't have an excess of powers, but she can do any number of sacred rituals, and bless objects to give them divine properties.

Personality: She believes herself to be a human Valkyrie, and her divine powers would seem to support this. Though not as expressive with her feeling as Rai is, you can always tell just what she thinks of a person or situation. She has a very no nonsense attitude when it comes to completing tasks, otherwise she has a very charming well rounded personality.

[Blackspade]

Name: Gyruza

Age: 21

Eye Color: Dark Green

Hair: Gold

Physical Apearence: Immensely strong and limber. Unmatchable agility, can move more deftly than a monkey through trees. Wears nothing but baggy, white, martial art pants. Scars on back and upper arms. Very tough, white skin, like natural armour. Faster than a warhorse.

Occupation: Protects Dragons from being hunted to extinction (Dragons are thought to be a threat to society and government officials in Europe are trying to eradicate them and cover up their existance.)

Family: Unknown. Was raised in the Chinese Highlands by Eastern Dragons

Affilliation: None as of now, but opposed to Aristocratic Society.

Non-battle Items: None, travels lightly other than two dual scabbards tightly cross-tied to his back.

Weapons: Two mid-size Mythril blades with a slight curve, almost like a Scimitar, which he can weild with immense skill.

Abilities: Being concieved of pure Draconic energy, he has elemental power flowing through his veins, which he can channel into his blades. His skin is nearly bulletproof, so he has no need for armour. He also is very skilled with blades and can move with immense speed, agility and power. He can communicate telepathically with Dragons

Personality: Wid and impulsive. Unfathomably loyal to his friends and family, will stop at nothing to protect them. Due to being raised in the wild, he isn't very adept at living in modern society. Insanely friendly toward the ones he trusts, dangerously hostile towards the ones he feels are harmful to the ones he trusts.

[Bm631]

Name: Dan Alexandru

Age: 24

Eye color: Blue, red when about to kill something

Hair: mid length dirty blond hair
Physical Apearence: Tall muscular build, 6 feet tall, always wears light black armor and a black cape. the armor has blades on it's wrist, shoulder and knee areas. always wears a red crystal pendant.

Occupation: Vampire, mercenary, hunter, owns a weapon store
Family: David Alexandru (father, dead), Sarah Alexandru (mother, dead), Ana-Marie Alexandru (younger sister, alive, wants dan dead)

Affiliation: Leader of a group of vampires called Red Death guild
Non-Battle Items: map, pen/journal, money bag, eye of power (pendant

Weapons: long sword, battle axe, crossbow (weapon of choice), throwing daggers, hand-to-hand combat skills

Abilities: as he is a vampire he has typical vampire powers, but the pendant he wears provides added strength and mental alertness, also reducing his typical vampire weaknesses, he has powerful hand-to-hand skills, fast reflexes, speed

Personality: extremely sarcastic and not serious, but incredibally violent and quick to anger, he hates all people, likes to exterminate entire villages. Loves to fight, always laughing at his foes. loves to drink.

bit of background: dan lived in a rural romanian town until he became what he did. in life his personality was no different from now. he killed all the villagers in his town. he loves a challenge, making him often hunt for a worthy foe. the pendant he wears belonged to his father, once a slayer


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Name: Ana-Marie Alexandru

Age: 19

Eye Color: Green

Hair: Long brown

Physical Apearence: 5.5 feet tall, strong, thin. wears light armor and brown/green clothing, has a blue crystal pendant, travels with a cape and hood.
Occupation: demon slayer/hunter

Family: (same as dan)
Non-Battle Items: map, pen/diary, cross necklace, Eye of Focus (pendant)

Weapons: morning star (prefered weapon), short sword, long bow, shield, hand-to-hand combat

Affiliation: (non yet)

Abilities: typical slayer abilities amplified by the pendant, enhanced strength and focus, speed

Personality: Ana is shy and not easy to talk to, she hates her brother for what he did and wants to kill him. She likes to travel alone and rarely smiles, has trouble speaking to guys she likes in secret. she hates to fight, but she feels she doesn't have a choice.

info on ana: she was still young when dan went rogue, the only person he didn't kill off. ana trained with another slayer til dan killed him.

[Zancrow]

Name: Zan

Age: 19

Eye Color: Dark-Greyish

Hair: Extreamly Silvery'ish. Long hair, with the back and sides spiked up.

Physical Apearence: 5ft8, leanly built, Wears a longish coat coloured black, and dark slacks And gloves.

Occupation: 'The Cleaner'

Family: Mother (unknown, died when he was born)
Father (also unknown, on the run from something)

Affilliation: To the highest payer

Non-battle Items: A gold necklace, which for some reason he holds dear to him

Weapons:
Kagutsuchi, A pure dark black long sword, With vicious edges spiking out of it, that he carrys on his back.
Fernix and Fornix, Duel Gunsword like objects.

Abilities:
Enchanted smell, speed and jump
Can call black flames from Kagutsuchi. The heat intensifies depending on how angry/stressed he is.

Personality: Extreamly cold, wont open up to anyone. Will do anything to get his job done, no matter what it is. Tends to be aggressive. His past was all about how to kill, and how to get the job done as quickly as possible.

[Bm631]

Name: Gavril Decibal

Age: 25

Eye Color: Brown

Hair: Long, curly, brown

Physical Apearence: 6.4 feet, muscular build. Lots of body hair. He wears a costume made of wolf fur that covers most of his body, even having a wolf head mask. he wears black pants, light armor and a torn black cape. he has iron blade claws on his finger and toes.

Occupation: Fighter, renegade killer

Family: Unknown

Non-Battle Items: money bag

Weapons: Iron blades on fingers and toes, long sword, (hand-to-hand mainly)

Abilities: He has enhanced strength and speed. His movements are animal like, he has incredible leg power and can jump high. His speed is hard to match.

Personality: He barely talks and seems to not care much for anything. He is blood thirsty and evil, but he takes no sides. He is as willing to kill a demon as well as a slayer. He fights to challenge himself. (Is human btw)

Name: Robert Alexandru

Age: 25

Eye Color: Blue

Hair: Long, curly brown

Physical Apearence: 6 feet tall, muscular build, he wears light plate mail armor with a black cape, the Alexandru family crest is on his armor. He has a large scar on his right eye.

Occupation: Demon slayer

Family: (Related to each Alexandru mentioned), cousin to Dan and Ana.

Affiliation: The Alexandru family was a major slayer bloodline, but at some point most were killed off.

Non battle items: Map, money bag, journal.

Weapons: Long sword and shield(prefered weapon), crossbow, daggers.

Abilities: Typical slayer abilities similar to Ana, but stronger then Ana.

Personality: Serious and focused, rarely laughs. He has great hatred towards Dan. 

Info: He is searching for the last remaining Alexandrus to resurect the old clan. He has faced many things, but nothing like Dan. The Alexandru family was once a bloodline destined to slay, but over time few were still well trained. Dan went on a mission to kill off his bloodline

Name: Andrew Engel

Age: 22

Eye Color: grey

Hair: mid length black

Physical Apearence: Tall/muscular 6.3 feet tall, has many battle scars, wears grey and black light armor.

Occupation: Mercenary, demon hunter

Family: Jacob Engel (father, dead), Maria Engel (mother)

Affiliations: Leader of a small demon hunter group: White Shadow

Non-Battle Weapons: bag for money, cross necklace

Weapons: Full-iron spear, short sword and long sword (used at same time)

Abilities: at a young age he was granted enhanced strength and other physical abilities by a demon who wanted him as his servant, his father slayed the demon but died in the process

Personality: rash, quick to fight. lacks focus and prefers speed over defense. Anti-social, has no friends, feels that his only purpose is to fight and kill others.

[supernintendo58]

Name: Francisca Molvante

Age: 19

Eye Color: Bright red.

Hair: Long, silver-ish, glows in moonlight.

Physical Apearence: 5'3", average girl build, with a bit of a muscle.

Occupation: -

Family: Richard Molvante(Father, French), Karla Molvante(Mother, Italian).

Affilliation: -

Non-battle Items: A charm in the shape of a crescent moon.

Weapons: Whip and a dagger.

Abilities: Climbs trees easily, and can travel long distances. "Tames" animals. Transforms into a wolf with silver fur during full moons, or, in times of dire need.

Personality: Acts sadistic towards humans. Is in peace with nature after what happened in her childhood/early teens.

Info: As a child, she was treated poorly, because of her red eyes and silver hair. People called her the "demon child," threw bibles at her, and other violent things, especially since she lived in Italy, and attended school at a Catholic church. One day(When she was about 13/14), she brought a dagger to school, and when the kids started teasing her in the alley, she couldn't take it anymore, and murdered them all. She ran away before anyone noticed, and is now traveling Europe, in an unknown location. She learned to make peace with animals and nature, and whenever she found a person hunting, she would hurt him/her, if not kill. She decided not to speak anymore, because of her hate for humans.

[BRADLEYS CHARACTER]

Name: Zeras LightBane

Age: 21

Eye Color: blood red

Hair: black shaggy down to the neck (similar to mine but deathly black)

Physical Appearance: 6 feet tall, 185 lbs, black shaggy hair, red eyes, well muscled but not buff, pale skin, average weight distribution, sharp short nails

Occupation: Leader of the Blood Stalkers, a highly trained elite vampire squad, 2nd in line to the LightBane family, a very powerful vampire organization in Eastern Germany

Family: LightBane Family---Leader/Father= Markus Lightbane---Mother/Wife to Markus= Katarina LightBane---1st Born/Son/Heir to Throne/Brother= Lucas LightBane---lots of unnamed family members that can be added in if needed, these are major family members

Affiliation:EVIL MUHAHAHAHAH

Non-battle Items: small pouch with blood packs, 1 syringe with hemoglobin accelerator which allows for 4 hours of direct sunlight without damage, pendant necklace with a golden heart locket(picture inside of dead lover, killed by human vampire hunters), LightBane crested ring on middle finger of right hand

Weapons: Black with red diamond trench coat which (houses weapons, protects from direct physical weaponry, and ancient vampire enchantment protects from low level holy weaponry), 2 small throwing knives on each side of the hip, shoulder holstered pistol with mixed rounds on a small belt (poison, silver, and incendiary), strapped to back is "LebenEsser aka Life Eater", 2 sided black steel sword, ruby center to the blade, silver hilt with LightBane crest on the pommel(given to vampires with military accomplishments), 31 inches, if hit by it, causes a bleeding wound that grows slowly, similar to Stigma used by Sabrac in Shakugan no Shana but less deadly.

Abilities: Normal vampire attributes(if questions just ask me ill tell you), "Dark Oath", Zeras can increase his abilities 5x for 20 seconds by saying "lord of blood give me strength to sate your hunger, and free the world of this tortured soul", in return Zeras can only use once every moon cycle and becomes weakened after its use unless he consumes the blood of his foe, "Shadow Dancer" can be used only at night, gives Zeras invisibility in shadows(can still be seen by eye powers, but not naked eye), and allows him to basically use double team from pokemon using other shadows except the mirrors cant do damage.

Personality: low profile, stealthy, very stubborn, laid back, hates his brothers ideas because Lucas is a politician so to speak and Zeras is a fighter, despises humans and all things holy, loved once and now is filled with hatred and malice, wants nothing more than to hunt and kill humans that go against evil, but especially vampire hunters, respectful to his elders and family, very proud of his status in life, not easily upset unless disrespect is shown to his family or dead lover, very go with flow until serious time.